Here we are with the next five pages. Click HERE for the first five. Or you can follow the labels at the end of the post.
Obviously I made my pages super busy. Busy, packed and hectic. Nevertheless, that's how I saw a lot of manga pages; busy and occupied. I suppose I was just copying, but to an extreme. I wish I had the skill to tell an efficient (as well as effective) story without too much fuss. Maybe if I tried to do this these days I could get it right.
Once again a busy page. I didn't have an manga screens (though later I started to print pictures on tracing paper and go from there), so I had to do all of my backgrounds and effects by hand. I used what I had. That's why I always tell people to just start wherever you are and enjoy the process.
I love Towel and Clip's teacher in the top left corner. "Break's over! Let's go!" he says. And as always, Towel decides to call him a "patty mouth dog." I don't know what that is. Should I ever get the time to write her these days, she would never say something like that. It's not clever enough. Nonetheless, here her and Clip continue to peep the new girl.
I remember showing this page to a friend of mine and he made a comment about the top panel character's (if you didn't catch it, her name is Miino) expression. He was pretty direct in his observation that the character looks as if she's about to do something salacious. I'll leave that to your imagination. Nonetheless, what I want to point out is how the teachers always seem to be yelling at Towel. Even this female teacher on the left is yelling at her to take a seat.
Towel's trying to be friends with the new girl, Miino. Instead, Miino is more interested in strangling Towel. The scene transitions over into the gym area where Towel and Clip reunite to discuss the new girl, as well as some of the male students playing ball topless. Said boys have taken a liking to Miino–naturally. This makes Towel even more curious as to who this new girl is.
I don't think Japanese female students wear bloomers anymore for gym class. However, this is another obvious testament to my love of the shojo manga genre.
The bloomers again. Other than that, here is where I introduced another male character (other than Towel's best friend Cornbread). I'm cringing here as I revisit this particular page. Why? Because while I was shaky, I don't like how I drew this guy at all. I think my drawings of him will get better. But yesh!
See you guys in the next post...